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# Chapter 1 — Scene 3: The Lanterns (Emma's First Encounter)
# ============================================================
# Characters: Protagonist, Emma
# Location: Riverside at dusk — lantern-lighting ceremony
# Affinity gates: Choice 3, Choice 4
# ---- DUSK AT THE RIVER ----
[background arg="res://orzo/locations/location_03_lantern_ceremony_2.png" fade="0.5"]
[pause=0.5]
The sky drains from amber to violet. Paper lanterns, unlit, rest in rows along the riverbank.
I'm at the water's edge, camera raised — waiting for the shot.
[pause=0.3]
Except it's not working.
[pause=0.3]
The angle is wrong. Stage light bleeds into the frame. I adjust. Still wrong. I crouch. Still
[pause=0.3]
join emma (Casual/idle) left pos=x+256px [animation="Fade In" length="0.6" wait="true"]
emma: You're framing it wrong.
[pause=0.2]
She's beside me, close enough that our sleeves brush. Incense, and something sweet.
[pause=0.3]
emma: [portrait=Casual/thinking] Lower. Let the water reflect the light. The lanterns aren't the subject... the river is.
[pause=0.3]
leave emma [animation="Fade In" length="0.6" wait="true"]
I adjust...
[pause=0.3]
Click.
[pause=0.6]
[background arg="res://orzo/locations/location_03_lantern_ceremony_close_up.png" fade="0.5"]
[pause=0.3]
join emma (Casual/amazed) left pos=x+256px [animation="Fade In" length="0.6" wait="true"]
emma: See? Now it sings.
[pause=0.3]
update emma (Casual/happy) left pos=x+256px [animation="Fade In" length="0.6" wait="true"]
She's still smiling when I look up. I'm smiling too before I realize it.
[pause=0.5]
emma: [portrait=Casual/happy] I'm Emma. Shamisen player. Occasional narrator. Three summers on this circuit. I've learned a thing or two about how light behaves around water.
[pause=0.2]
emma: [portrait=Casual/idle] You must be the new photographer. Takeda told me, "The new photographer arrives today." I guess that's you.
[pause=0.2]
emma: [portrait=Casual/thinking] ...kisha-san. That okay?
# ---- CHOICE 3: The Correction ----
emma: [portrait=Casual/happy] So?
- "Thank you. I'm {ORZO_01.player_name}. Are you with the festival?"
set {ORZO_01.emma_affinity} += 2
[pause=0.2]
emma: [portrait=Casual/happy] With it? Kisha-san, I *am* the festival.
Well — one-third of it. The other two-thirds are a fire dancer who doesn't talk and a van that might not make it to September.
[pause=0.3]
She laughs, carrying across the water. Festival-goers glance over and smile.
- Lower the camera and just watch the lanterns with her.
set {ORZO_01.emma_affinity} += 3
[pause=0.3]
I lower the camera. The lanterns drift on dark water — a ribbon of slow fire.
[pause=0.3]
emma: [portrait=Casual/amazed] ...oh.
[pause=0.2]
emma: [portrait=Casual/happy] Most photographers never put the camera down.
- Nod, keep shooting.
set {ORZO_01.emma_affinity} -= 1
[pause=0.3]
I nod, camera still raised. There are more frames to capture.
[pause=0.5]
When I look again, she's stepped back... still polite, but the space between us has grown.
# ---- CHOICE 4: The Name ----
[pause=0.5]
emma: [portrait=Casual/thinking] Kisha-san.
[pause=0.2]
She's testing it. Smiling.
- Smile back. "And what should I call you?"
set {ORZO_01.emma_affinity} += 1
[pause=0.2]
emma: [portrait=Casual/happy] Emma. Just Emma. The festival elders? They say, "That girl talks too much." I earned that one.
- "Kisha-san? I've been called worse."
set {ORZO_01.emma_affinity} += 1
[pause=0.2]
She laughs — bright and sudden.
[pause=0.3]
emma: [portrait=Casual/happy] Oh, I'm sure. But I mean it nicely. Promise.
- "Just {ORZO_01.player_name} is fine."
[pause=0.2]
emma: [portrait=Casual/idle] Mm. Noted.
[pause=0.3]
She doesn't say anything. But she's still smiling.
# ---- CONTINUE ----
[pause=0.5]
A voice from the stage: "Emma! Two minutes!"
[pause=0.3]
emma: [portrait=Casual/happy] Duty calls. But kisha-san — after the show, come find me. There's a food stall three blocks in that does imagawayaki that'll ruin you for all other food.
[pause=0.2]
emma: ...
[pause=0.2]
emma: [portrait=Casual/happy] I've done the research.
[pause=0.3]
She waves and disappears into the crowd.
leave emma [animation="Fade Out" length="0.4"]
[pause=0.5]
I look down at the camera. The reflection shot is still there.
[pause=0.3]
She was right. About everything.
[pause=0.5]
[signal arg="scene_complete"]
[end_timeline]